Wednesday, November 2, 2016

The blowout

     On October 23,2016,  A car had a blowout. The driver automatically urges to gain control of the car and pulls over. Along with a pick-up in front of it. The driver get out of the car and headed towards the back of his sedan. He was distraught and yelled at the Pick-up in front of him to stay. As he observed his blown out tire, he noticed three nails in his tire. He looked back to find more nails on the street. He quickly picked the remaining nails and clears up the street. When the man was done picking up the nails, local enforcements arrived and questioned  the man. While the other officer talked to the Man in the pick-up. Just within a few mins, 63rd and Pulaski was filled with cop cars.   He States “ From now on, I will not try to run over everything I see.”

1 comment:

  1. Your summary was very direct and detailed but there are a lot of misspelled words. You are also very good at setting up a good sentence with periods and commas. Good job on your word choice, it makes your whole paragraph and yourself sound very educated. Although you are missing a picture which the reader will want to seee in order to help visualize a little bit more other than that I think your summary is good.



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